Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Again with the creative writing!

Today I want you to write a horror story/paragraph. Use your imagination and go wild. Where are your characters? What is after them? Is it human or not? What will happen to your characters? Scare me!

10 comments:

  1. 10 bucks says Rachael writes about Vampires :)

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  2. :-) I bet that Rachael does, too!

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  3. Scooby and the gang are again in danger, but they don't know it yet. They have a new member added to their group, Scooby's girlfriend Yboocs. But... Is she really Scooby's "true rove", is she the one bring danger, or is she the danger?

    Oh, boy I can feel the anticipation.

    Anyway, the gang's van runs out of gas in the small town of Colfax. Noone is sure where this place is, but they know that gang is in trouble because the creepy music had begun.

    They are attacked from behind and the attackers drive off, but wait! where is Scooby and Yboocs? Noone saw what had happened. Did Yboocs dog nap Scooby or are they both victims?

    To be continued...

    Lame I realize, but it is the best I have...the scariest movie I have ever seen is E.T. so I don't have much experience...give me a break!

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  4. Hm, well I am not too good at making up horror stories, but I can always try. Don't expect to be scared or anything though.

    It is late night, around 2 o'clock and Ron, Veronica and thier dog Baxter were taking a random stroll threw the cemetary. While walking past a grave, Ron heard a voice. It sounded like it was coming from underneath the tombstone. Veronica was very scared. Out of nowhere came a blood dripping, cut to pieces, part of a body. The body went after Baxter and than disappeared with the dog. Veronica took off running because she was scared. Ron stayed behind trying to look for Baxter. He never did find Baxter and now Ron is stuck in the cemetary because the body put a curse on him and he became a monster.

    Sorry this is so lame Mrs. Myers.

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  5. kevin on scary thingsWednesday, April 21, 2010

    My horror story is true and is something that actually happenned to me.
    One night last summer I was sitting on a couch in my living room enjoying being off of my feet for I had been on them all day. It was becoming dusk as I watched tv.
    I was staring at the screen when all of a sudden I caught a glimpse of a shiny object in the corner of my eye. At first I just thought that it was my dog, Lillie, but then it proceed to hover down the big hill behind my house. I was looking very intently by this time and beginning to freak out a bit. I shouted in my head,"OH MY GOSH IT IS A GHOST!" I had never seen anything like this before and I was in awe. I uneasily hollared my mom to get the camera and come quickly. The both of us ran outside and our mouths dropped wide open at what we thought we were seeing. We both peered at a ghost!
    I looked as closely and intently as I could at what I had dreaded of seeing my whole life. The strange object looked like it was glowing and had the appearence of a full skeleton with all of its internals in still. But as I looked closer I determined that it was actually more rounded, and in a cluster. It was stuck in a big bush that is in the middle of the yard.
    Then I finally figured out that it was not actually a ghost.....

    It was bunck of BALLOONS!!! I was like" Mom, we just got scared over a bunch of balloon. What the heck!"

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  6. No vampire..sorry guys.

    Cindy was walking down the school hallway after her track meet. The lights were off and the building was deserted. On her way to the locker room, Cindy had the feeling that someone was watching her. This feeling made her nervous but she thought that her mind was playing tricks on her. When Cindy entered the locker room to grab her bag, she heard a noise behind her. She turned and looked but there was nobody there. Cindy told herself that she was going crazy, but that is when the crazy really began. The lights flickered and the water in the showers turned on. Cindy was now scared. She raced for the door but when she got there, it was locked. Overcome with fear and panic, Cindy fainted. She woke up in a small room lit with red lights. It was the unused dark room by the chemistry room. The walls were covered in photos of her. They were pictures taken without her knowledge, at home, at school, even at the mall. She looked around for her attacker, but there was no one in sight. Cindy tried to escape from the dark room, but every time she came close to the door it would send a force at her and nock her away. Cindy spent the entire night in the dark room. The next morning when she heard the teacher enter the class room, Cindy began to yell. He didn’t hear her. Nobody could hear here. All day Cindy shouted and begged for help but nobody came. It was like the room was keeping other from finding her. Whenever someone thought about going into the dark room, they would suddenly forget entirely about it.

    It was the next fall, when the chemistry class began it photography unit that Cindy’s body was found. Everyone had always wondered what had happened to the girl, and they never really found out.

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  7. One summer evening a group of friends and I camped out near the Red Cedar River. We had canoed all day and were ready to relax. Having started the fire, we heard a noise in the brush. We weren't sure what it was. Was it a bear? Was it a wolf? Maybe a cougar? All we had were a few hunting knives. Grabbing them, we ran for the brush and into the woods. There were a pack of wolves surrounding us. Knowing we were outnumbered, we backed our way towards our canoes in the river. While stepping in the canoe, the wolves jumped us. We tried retaliating, however, but were hopeless. The wolves tore us to shreds. That was the last of Casey, David, Nathan, and Luke.

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  8. It was a cool fall day in the town of Bregford. Jamie was walking down the sidewalk toward her town house after track practice. All of a sudden she heard a shrill scream. She looked around and saw where the ear piercing noise came from - the old abandoned house across the road from her. All towns have a house like it - the one that everyone gets dared to touch on Halloween, the one that houses ghosts and skeletons of people that were mysteriously trapped inside. But none of these thoughts crossed Jamie's mind when she heard the scream. She ran right toward the house, determined to find and help the person in trouble. However, as soon as she burst through the front door, she sensed something was not right. She felt a huge wave of hot air, and it was extremely muggy inside and there was a distinct odor of something metallic - BLOOD.
    Jamie walked carefully down the first hallway she saw and slowly opened the last door in the hall. She saw a flash of yellow and she was knocked to the ground. She let out a tremendous scream and then she blacked out.
    The next week Jamie's mother was in her room, crying because the police have had no luck in searching for her daughter. There had been five other girls who went missing and nobody knew where they were.
    They never found them.

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  9. The year is 1935 and all of the students of the Jewish high school in Germany are gathered in an assembly. They don't know that a group of Nazi's disguised as students are waiting to commit genocide. A girl named Natalie came to school late that day making her late for the assembly as well. Natalie starrted approaching the gym to go to the assembly when she heard the click of a gun being loaded. Being a Jew during this time meant knowing this utterly important sound. She crept up to the next classroom to find it full of students she did not recognize. Most importantly, they had guns. Following her first instinct, Natalie slithered back slowly to find a place to hide. She knew the lockers would be the best place to hide because from there she had easy access through out the school. Lockers were set up in aisles, as if at a grocery store. While creeping towards the lockers, she started to hear the students come out of the auditorium, then immediate gunfire and screams. In mass chaos, Natalie ran as fast as her legs could take her. Natalie could people beside her and she prayed it was her peers; she was too afraid to look. Natalie reached the aisles of lockers and went six rows down in fear the Nazis would start on the first row. She hid in a locker, while hearing other students try the same as well. She could hear the Nazis approaching the lockers. The unfortunate cries of young men and women were heard from the first aisle of lockers. An itching thought told Natalie she needed to be farther away from the first row. She snuck out quietly and proceeded to the ninth aisle of lockers. This aisle was also the band's hallway. Instruments were layed astrewed every which way. At the sight of the piano, Natalie ran to it, lifted the lid, pushed in her small frame, and closed the lid. She could hear the Nazis closer and closer. They were on the next aisle over. After a few final shots, she heard them leave. Natalie cautiously opened the lid, but no one was there. She climbed out of the piano, as other students were climbing out of their hiding spots as well. Natalie smelt something peculiar, it was smoke. The Nazis were burning the school to make sure there were no survivors. Natalie knew of a way out, so she signaled to the others to follow her. They crept silently past the innocent bodies to a window that went to the school woods. The smoke was getting thick and hard to breath. Natalie peered out to see a Nazi patroling the building, as were others. Natalie had one more idea. There was a fence that separated the school from the community. Natalie's idea was to somehow jump over the fence and into the friendly neighbor Charlie's yard. She led the way to the spot, where no Nazis were patroling. Natalie opened the window and hepled the first boy out trying not to cough from the smoke. After three kids, Charlie came out to help. She was on the last few people when she felt her skin start to blister from the flames. Finally the last girl was safe and it was her turn now. Natalie went to take her step into freedom when she felt a hand grip over her mouth and pull her backwards...

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  10. I, Etan Noham, one night escaped the trials and tribulations of adult career life and, with longing anticipation, returned to my teenage sanctuary; not a sanctuary of drugs or sex as in many of my fellow classmen, but of hunting in the beautiful Nohom acreage. Hunting is the sport of enlightenment and self-therapy and therefore is a passtime which I thoroughly anticipate and crave. This night, however, was like none I had ever experienced. It occured at twighlight; the sheer horor that cost me my left hand and my longingness for wilderness gone forever. The sun had just set-- leaving still enough light to see clearly on normal occasions-- and the swamp below my hunting perch of choice looked uncharacteristically dark. Thick layers of fog began setting on the damp, chilly swamp with an heir of spooky translucence; the creek was visible, and even the woods across was decipherable, yet the fog left the vestige of disorientation about my wits. As I listened, the entire woods took on the same eerie mood of peculiarity as My inkling of confusion was so authoritative that it soon turned to a slight amount of fear, which I'd experienced many times in the woods after dark, but nevertheless drove me to my descension from my stand a strong half hour earlier than was routine. To be continued.......

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