Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Tuesday

This is a creative writing prompt. You may write a short story or a poem. Be sure that you are descriptive!

Respond to the following: I thought I saw...

8 comments:

  1. I thought I saw him
    His blond hair
    His cute smile
    His blue eyes
    But again it was only a dream
    I thought I saw him
    But still he’s gone
    The only thing I can do is pray to God
    That I will see him again
    /Jennifer

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  2. I thought I saw what you were
    But now I see someone new
    Someone who cares
    Someone who listens
    Someone I want a part of my life
    I never thought I would see this part of you
    I thought you were like the rest
    Everyone saw but me
    Now I think I want to see the real you

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  3. I thought I saw something real
    This felt real at the time
    now I am left with much to ponder
    left me in a world of wonder
    what I felt I feel no more,
    It wasn't even real at all
    So why am I left with a hole of pain?
    It's going to be hard to feel that real once more,
    i'm afraid to fall again.

    Jenni Gust

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  4. I though I saw a flash of light
    one as quick as lightning

    The rain was heavy and damp
    Nothing could contain this torrent

    The world seemed empty and cold
    Though the headlights go flying past

    Its a cold and windy night
    The trees face great catastrophe

    I am safe inside my sanctuary
    Its bitter cold but far from scary

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  5. I thought I saw myself
    but it was only my reflection.
    You thought you saw me too,
    and I thought I could believe
    but the reflection is deception
    and my shroud has been acheived.
    The shroud of solitude, too
    hard to comprehend
    too hard to try to break through
    too hard to try to end.
    I thought I saw myself
    but it was only my reflection.
    Myself is so much deeper,
    beneath layers of regression.
    I thought I saw you too,
    but now I know I saw your shell
    Your shell lies in a heaven,
    while yourself lies in a hell.

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  6. I thought I saw a little boy
    with blonde hair and blue eyes;
    so innocent and young.
    I thought I saw a boy
    playing basketball wearing a mohawk.
    I thought I saw a teenager
    who was just trying to fit in
    with long dark hair, studded belts, skater shoes, and braces.
    I knew this person since we first met at the campground...
    When I thought I knew who this person was
    until she joined the army and shaved his head.
    Now he's a mature young adult
    who makes my heart melt. :)

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  7. I thought I saw
    a flick of a tail
    trailing behind
    pawing at the window.
    I thought I felt
    a cold nose
    pushing open the door
    looking for a sunbeam.
    I thought I heard
    a soft meow
    calling out for friends
    and fellow cats.

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  8. I thought I saw a shadow
    moving far beyond
    the outer limits of the system
    but now the shadow is gone.
    I thought I saw my memories
    on the backside
    of my eye
    but now the memories are fading
    and will eventually die.
    I thought I saw
    what was truly meant to be
    but now that I'm placed inside
    It wasn't what I was supposed to see.
    I thought I saw it,
    But I was wrong
    the only thing I saw
    Were the lyrics escaping in a song.

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